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How Much Longer
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I remembered today, when you would wake to share my night
The warmth of a thousand smiles,touched me deep inside
Then the bitter tears fell,as I slipped back to reality
Looking at the clock,I wondered how much longer it would be
I leave myself no spare moments,for I think of you in these times
As often before, left open again,knowing you'll never be mine
Precious few are my heartfelt words,yet they hold the hurt in me
Surely I will find my peace,but how much longer will it be
Each day like an ongoing poem,that has no journeys end
Nor does it hold the rhythmic beauty,seems I've lost the will to pen
Only sadness can spill onto the pages,my tears are all I can see
How much longer do I need to hurt,before my heart will set you free
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
... [
2003-09-06 06:05:00]
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Re: How Much Longer
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 08:06:02 AM AEST
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bittersweet, brought back memories and thoughts I have had
Shari |
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Re: How Much Longer
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 03:52:05 PM AEST
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elegance and strength here in a painful write
i do like your work. Crow |
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Re: How Much Longer
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by Kimmie_mac on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 05:09:07 PM AEST
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Another good poem. I like reading your work.
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Re: How Much Longer
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 09:49:27 PM AEST
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| I know that I've been here before. I relate well to your beautiful, poetic words. |
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Re: How Much Longer
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by painted_echos on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 02:30:56 PM AEST
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i wonder as well...this is so expressive and beautifully written
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Re: How Much Longer
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 01:52:14 AM AEST
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| A lovely heartfelt write ... take care, Jan |
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Re: How Much Longer
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 07:40:57 AM AEST
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YOU ARE NOTHING BUT A IMMORAL BITCH
GOD WILL SEE YOU GET YOURS. |
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Re: How Much Longer
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 03:16:52 PM AEST
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Beautiful and sentimental write - love your work - and yes we have all had these feelings at one time or anther
merry |
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