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Wasted By Your Blast
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Writing with no passion,rhythm has its doubt
Venting my emotions,turning inside out
Pacing wooden floors,in the dead of night
Tears of wax forming,within the candlelight
Baileys half received,with just a hint of ice
Numbing all the hurt,as your words take a slice
Leaving me in pieces,so confused,lost and hurt
My smile a distant memory,as I crumble just like dirt
I light a cigarette,then watch it burn away
Contemplating endlessly,living another day
Waiting for my fighting spirit,to make another show
Waiting...still waiting,I'm late, I have to go
Close my mind, shut off my breath
Forever free in starry death
Kissed by tears that stain the face
For someone gone I can't replace
She is no more,her spirit gone
Watched her slip,fall far from
Where she would once fight again
Find her solace in the rain
Now the dark,her cloak of black
Takes her away,she doesn't look back
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
... [
2003-09-06 05:05:00]
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Re: Wasted By Your Blast
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 08:15:20 AM AEST
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what a kickin' poem, great energy, great movement of thought, just class,
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Re: Wasted By Your Blast
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 03:28:29 PM AEST
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| you write well of pain as well as beauty, good work, Crow |
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Re: Wasted By Your Blast
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by Kimmie_mac on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 05:11:43 PM AEST
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| Good write. Kimmie_mac |
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Re: Wasted By Your Blast
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 09:51:25 PM AEST
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| Such a sad poem, but so incredibly penned. |
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Re: Wasted By Your Blast
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 02:00:33 AM AEST
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| I like the difference in meter in the two verses ... painful memories, but a wonderful write ... Jan |
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