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My Last Moments
Contributed by
twinky
on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Harmful secrets,
Deadly sins,
The razor blade
Now pierces my skin.
It slides across,
And blood runs out,
Will I die?
I still have doubts.
I close my eyes,
Savor the pain
What do I have to lose?
What do I have to gain?
I feel so weak,
I can no longer stand.
As my body begins to wobble,
The stained razor blade falls from my hand.
Darkness now comes,
I'm breathing no more.
My heart has stopped,
And my dead body collapses to the floor.
Copyright ©
twinky
... [
2003-09-05 22:05:00]
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Re: My Last Moments
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 01:54:23 AM AEST
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| Magnificant poem. I can envision the blood dripping from the cuts, it's good that you are getting the pain through your words. Keep writing and the pain will soon fade. You are a great and beautiful writer. Keep writing. Love this poem! |
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Re: My Last Moments
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 05:15:43 AM AEST
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i really liked this,and agree with Goose, that it's good to get things out this way..
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Re: My Last Moments
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by Zee on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 03:39:55 PM AEST
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| Very Nicely written but why this Self Destruction? Anyway good write! |
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