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Cud
Contributed by
Jason_Robert_Britt
on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Through civilization you become uncivilized;
You break your way through social chains.
A stampede of hungry cows;
Where are you when the grass is gone?
There is no greener side.
On fire, the sun will milk you dry.
Famine, disease, infliction.
Desire drove you mad!
Rabid, your eyes lost focus;
So slow to see the light!
Is this your happiness?
Your perfect world?
You've spit cud on yourself!
Now the ants will have their feast,
As the bees burrow beneath your skin,
To sting the heart of blindness from within.
Oh! the terror; imperiling the herd,
For your own self ambition,
The shame!
When there is nothing left,
Nothing but stinking carcasses,
The maggots will lay their eggs.
Evolution is so insane,
But prophecy must be fullfilled.
Copyright ©
Jason_Robert_Britt
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2003-09-05 15:35:00]
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Re: Cud
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 07:05:28 PM AEST
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Nice write Jason, I felt what you were talking about, I loved it, great write.
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Re: Cud
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 08:59:32 PM AEST
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| Excellent work. I like your lecturing tone.... the fools. I especially like the line about evolution. Great job. |
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Re: Cud
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by shelby on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 02:41:02 AM AEST
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wow this is great and so true. One day I will learn not to learn my lessons the hard way lol, I hope anyway! I like the way you used comparrisons and contrasts with this as well.
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Re: Cud
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by Bizzy on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:44:35 PM AEST
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Dear Jason Robert Britt, You have the ability to 'see', don't you? Although I don't enjoy reading dark, tragic, and sad poetry, there is that reality out there. I certainly don't like what I see in our society. If it were not for the few heroes and saints, the prospects would be too despairing to bear.
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Re: Cud
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by Cancer on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 09:53:03 AM AEST
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i'm speechless. very, very powerful. that's all i can think of. excellent.
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