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Touched By A Rainbow
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Grey are the clouds that hover above
Choking on pent up tears
Dark blue,the feeling that comes without love
The loneliness when you're not here
Purple and gold are the sunsets
That I sit alone with here everyday
Bright yellow and soft orange rise every morn
The reminder,you're so far away
White Sparkles on velvet,a starry night
Perfect for lovers,maybe you and I
Lost in the darkness,I search for your light
As my wishes fall fast from the sky
Soft pink is the smile you have given
It shows in my eyes,of dark brown
Dark is the shadow of sadness
When you're gone,the black comes around
Mauve is the shade of my soul
Soothed and relaxed with your mind
Green is the grass where in dreams we lie
Blue,red and purple entwined
Colours of you through my system
A kaleidoscope of tears and smiles
Holder of the proverbial pot'o'gold
You're my rainbow of every emotion,worthwhile
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lovingwhispers
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2003-09-05 15:05:00]
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Re: Touched By A Rainbow
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 03:45:11 PM AEST
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your heart sings such beautiful colors
Shari |
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Re: Touched By A Rainbow
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 03:54:09 PM AEST
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The colors just danced off the page here!
Just beautiful! Christina |
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Re: Touched By A Rainbow
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by Ivy on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 04:37:25 PM AEST
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| nice colourful ode. Ivy |
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Re: Touched By A Rainbow
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by Saira on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 05:43:32 PM AEST
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Great! Beautifully done.
Saira |
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Re: Touched By A Rainbow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 07:24:01 PM AEST
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| Beautiful colors you described. Your words are truly wondreful. Great poem! |
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Re: Touched By A Rainbow
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by PoloRM on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 01:18:06 AM AEST
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lovely ;o)
I wish there were
More colours in this world
Maybe then your poem
Will have for longer swirled.
Even though there are few colours
I loved your poem very much
There'll never be enough colours for love
No matter how many rainbows you touch. |
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Re: Touched By A Rainbow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 01:33:59 AM AEST
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| beautiful images from the heart, Crow |
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Re: Touched By A Rainbow
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by shelby on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 02:43:07 AM AEST
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touched me greatly with this write, your incredible .
michelle |
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