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The best there ever can be !
Contributed by
ivy
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Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
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I don't know when I'll do things that people would appreciate,
Carve a name for myself that would never ever fade.
I need to do lot's to prove myself,
I don't know when I would come out of this closed shelf.
I see people who are doing much better,
Few are the kinds you could call go getters.
I feel myself wrapped in a woollen sweater,
and writing this ode with a mind that fetters.
All of this gets me down sometimes,
But I get geared up when I hear the friendly chimes.
I know that I'll always have people with me.
Who would say "Iam the best there ever can be".
Copyright ©
ivy
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2003-09-05 12:35:00]
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Re: The best there ever can be !
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by POOBEAR on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 12:42:05 PM AEST
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Good for you!! this is a wonderful write.
Keep up the positive thinking and
the great writing.
Take Care,
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Re: The best there ever can be !
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by Saira on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 05:49:25 PM AEST
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Very good one, indeed. Well done!
Saira |
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Re: The best there ever can be !
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by The_Poet on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 07:40:37 AM AEST
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Nice lil Poem!! Great to see the +ve's in the -ve's !!!!
Keep em coming |
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Re: The best there ever can be !
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by Damien on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 09:12:00 AM AEST
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| You have locked yourself in your own minds shelf so just open it and see how things appear totally different, cause the way I (and I'm sure a lot of others too) see it, you already are the best :) |
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Re: The best there ever can be !
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by johnnywords on
Saturday, 1st December 2007 @ 03:07:55 PM AEST
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| Good write. Keep 'em coming! |
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