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FORFEITURE
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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sick of all the compromise
tired of all the sacrifice
losing sleep over loss
twenty times turned and tossed
bearing witness to the pain
false faith in the rain
walking backwards for the fun
lost sight of noon-day sun
take a trip to cross the bridge
sanity's lost just over the ridge
trashing reality's reputation
stay within your station
only then will you be loved whole
clear to me a censored role
bring me in from the cold
teach me to not be so bold
forgive me my ramblings
rebuild the shamblings
of a life with heavy baggage
same old adage
what she wants
is as far as france
she can never see
through the forest through the trees
left to fend on her own
left alone and all grown
Copyright ©
jaeann
... [
2003-09-05 11:35:00]
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Re: FORFEITURE
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 11:59:14 AM AEST
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your words touch me so much right to the soul
Shari |
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Re: FORFEITURE
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by POOBEAR on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 12:17:44 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful . I am amazed at
how many different ways you have
of expressing the many emotions
that you have probably wanted to
let out for so long.Please keep them
coming !
Your friend,
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Re: FORFEITURE
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by wolfflow on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 03:59:15 PM AEST
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nice energy, i enjoyed the motion of it,
paul |
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Re: FORFEITURE
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 08:50:30 PM AEST
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| Your poem hit me in a place within my soul that not very people hit. Love your words. |
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Re: FORFEITURE
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by eternityandaday4u on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 12:35:14 AM AEST
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this poem was great and very touching. your emotions were caught vividly in words. keep them coming you truly are a great writter!!!!! love always
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Re: FORFEITURE
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 01:05:12 AM AEST
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| your writing really gets a point across to me. you always do super work. Crow |
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Re: FORFEITURE
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by mystical_illusion on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 05:43:56 PM AEST
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I liked your poem down to the point and a great use of imagination.
well done
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