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In Dreaming
Contributed by
avarice_riot
on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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In dreaming I saw an image
Beyond the immortally spinning webs of frost
And the saturnine mist of the evening.
A pair of enigmatic spheres so inky
and bottomless in their depths, that if
I were to cast stones into them
I'm sure I would not hear their
disembarkation at the bottom.
So stealthily did you arrive
With not even the tiniest hint of sound.
Looking taciturn and reticent
As whispers would only intrude upon
and halt the chiming of the petals.
Silent as we are, I can still perceive you
Weaving in and out of the snowflakes
They, with the ornate patterns.
Inhaling in the fragility of this reverie
I've caught the golden arrow of your sending
And now I know, and understand:
"For I will wake, and breathe in reality.
For there will be no intervals in Time.
And innocence belies me
And innocence belies me
And innocence belies me
And innocence betrays me..."
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Re: In Dreaming
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by Rage on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 10:00:32 AM AEST
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Wow! Amazing is all I have to say!
~*~RAGE~*~ |
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Re: In Dreaming
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 10:03:22 AM AEST
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well written moving piece
Shari |
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Re: In Dreaming
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by Ronald on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 11:08:15 AM AEST
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| You really have a great talent in writing poetry. Good job pal! |
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Re: In Dreaming
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by wolfflow on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 04:11:51 PM AEST
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an excellent and stimulating read,
paul |
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Re: In Dreaming
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 12:48:03 AM AEST
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| I was moved incredibly by this poem ... beautiful work ... Jan |
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Re: In Dreaming
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by Merry on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 01:09:00 PM AEST
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| very moving work - reads so smoothly and very melodic - interersting topic too - why do so many of us have the same kind of dreams? |
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