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Chimera
Contributed by
avarice_riot
on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Under a sky of glittering ashes
Do I seek to retrieve you?
Rapidly degenerating, immersed
As I breathe in this whirlpool
of hollow desire, a patchwork quilt
of blue, red and the bottomless
strokes of black.
Seething as I brush against the underside
Do I hunt the impossible?
Merely a pipedream away yet too remote to reach
Merely a vision of my imagining.
Icy shards of my essence
Breathe life into each of your fears
Do I hear you calling me from below
In hopes of ever redeeming salvation?
I choose to amble along, hand in hand with my inner beasts
Treading a path of heinous unknowns
just to catch a transient glimpse of you.
This is my aria, this is my prayer for one departed
This is my solitary kamikaze, an inessential sacrifice
For I cannot and never will be able
to let go of my reminiscence
of you.
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2003-09-05 08:05:00]
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Re: Chimera
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by Rage on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 10:09:11 AM AEST
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Your words are truly remarkable! Excellent piece of work!
~*~RAGE~*~ |
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Re: Chimera
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by Ronald on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 11:05:40 AM AEST
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| You expressed yourself well here. KUDOS to ya :-) |
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Re: Chimera
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by Qohinoor on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 05:07:27 AM AEST
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| Does this poem have something to do with the person "Adair" is dedicated to? |
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Re: Chimera
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by Merry on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 01:11:48 PM AEST
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Wow you can write - straight from the soul - beautiful piece - dark and haunting
merry |
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