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Secret
Contributed by
crow
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Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I stand in the line that seperate
light and dark, on a lonely stretch of road.
Close my eyes,
as souls rush-by.
Pray you only see
half of me.
There within the beast lies,
that feeds on fear, anger, and doubt.
Fear to tell your secret,
quell the essence of death.
An easy fall, on a lonely road,
standing at the line......Crow
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2003-09-04 17:35:00]
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Re: Secret
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 05:46:38 PM AEST
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| You have this way...that has me pulled to where you are.Your pen is a paintbrush...my eyes,the canvas.WOW!! |
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Re: Secret
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 06:12:03 PM AEST
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| Great poem! |
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Re: Secret
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 06:38:04 PM AEST
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excellent again sends chills deep within
Shari |
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Re: Secret
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 07:42:49 PM AEST
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Oh Crow, what a wonderful way of saying and feeling where I've been so many times before...Too close, and then maybe too far away....happy medium...but who's to tell? Your words take me where my heart is a well....filling, filling, filling still!
Wonderful poem Crow...it's hard to find your way!
Lovingcritters
Connie
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Re: Secret
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by Saira on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 09:18:28 PM AEST
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Wonderful write!
"Close my eyes,
as souls rush-by.
Pray you only see
half of me."
I liked these lines a lot!
Saira |
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Re: Secret
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 11:51:38 PM AEST
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fear to tell your secret.........yes!!!
i wish you peace at the end of your shift....
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Re: Secret
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by PhantomsLDY on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 01:03:09 AM AEST
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| This is a wonderful write!!! So many times our eyes see what our heart refuse to feel as it can be such a horrible thing sometimes!! |
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Re: Secret
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 11:46:48 AM AEST
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The line between light and dark is always an
edgy road to be on. And only is our secret within that holds us. May we all be joined in the lighter side of the road. :-)
I liked this one alot!!!!!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Secret
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by stargazer on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 09:55:07 AM AEST
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What a difficult position to be in. Seeing what your heart will not allow you to feel. It is never an easy thing.
//amy// |
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Re: Secret
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by Merry on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 04:09:18 PM AEST
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| this is stark and conveys a sense of dark and ominous things - we recently had a terrible hit and run accident in our town and a 17 year old boy was killed - your poem reminds me of the tragedy |
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