|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Bruised Sky
Contributed by
damien
on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
|
Every night as I lie myself down,
I see a sky that is bruised
and clouds that are scarched,
I don't know whether they really are bruised and burnt,
or is it my own world that has been upturned,
whatever it is, it don't matter no more,
cause inside and out, I'm feeling quite sore.
Now as I sit and wait at the cemetery gate,
I sing to the guy digging my grave,
"would you dig me a shallow one,
so that during the day I can feel the sun,
and when it rains I can get wet,
and shiver as the cold drops onto me plummet?"
As I see the way fate ius throwing me around,
I think it would be better when I go to lie under the ground.
Copyright ©
damien
... [
2003-09-04 13:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Bruised Sky
(User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 03:56:20 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| cool conversation with the digger....... i like this piece!!! |
|
|
Re: Bruised Sky
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 07:29:56 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this was chilling and very well written. I have felt like that before as well. Good write keep it up.
Bobo (Joel) |
|
|
Re: Bruised Sky
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ivy on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:22:40 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| nice write. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
