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3 Feet From The Moon
Contributed by
chicken
on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm three feet from the moon,
Walking weightless in the air.
No one here to stop me,
My life here without care.
I windmill my way into solitude,
Not missing the past at all.
I cry watching the earth rise,
As deeper into silence I fall.
I waste away as my oxygen depletes,
Needing no more for I have no life below.
Slowly dying but doing nothing to stop it,
Thereby forefieting my soul.
The legacy I left on Earth behind me,
Is long since buried and dead.
Three feet from the moon is where she should be,
Or so my troubled mind said.
Copyright ©
chicken
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2003-09-04 06:35:00]
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Re: 3 Feet From The Moon
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by Daydreamer on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 09:50:55 AM AEST
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| I know how it feels to feel as though you have nothing meaningful to help push you through life but don't give up just yet it will get better. |
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Re: 3 Feet From The Moon
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 12:33:43 PM AEST
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| i windmill my way into solitude....cool poem....i love the dreamy feel as you're slipping.... |
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Re: 3 Feet From The Moon
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 02:07:28 PM AEST
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| A very nice write. Ivy |
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