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Heartless
Contributed by
Merry
on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Surrounded by your cold enterprise
Of freedom you exist inside
The references of your domain
Reciting loves poetic phrase
So many words – said and done
Truth is twisted between your lies
To keep things under your control
While I dangle helplessly
You smile and keep me hanging on
Trapped inside your hungry heart
You suck on love until it dies
Leaving me to drown in tears
Admonish me for what I am
While you stay in your dark disguise
Safe in your province of seclusion
Where none can touch you
Shielding the heart of stone inside
Cold welcome to my love
So freely given from the start
To a stranger without a heart
~ merry copyright 2003 ~
Copyright ©
Merry
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2003-09-03 03:05:00]
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Re: Heartless
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 04:44:13 PM AEST
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| Absolutely beautiful. I've been where your poem leds poeple. Trapped behind a cold damp wall, thinking that everything would be okay if I kept everyone at a distance. I had barely a heart left in my chest. You are a wonderful writer! |
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Re: Heartless
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 05:08:51 PM AEST
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| Excellent write ... wise words indeed ... Jan |
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Re: Heartless
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by painted_echos on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 07:33:27 PM AEST
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| this is a fabulously dark, love lost poem; it struck a nerve (well, blew it away actually). i loved it. thank you...and more, please. |
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