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Can You Hear Me Now???
Contributed by
pretty_n_pink
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Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm SCREAMING out for help!!!
Can you hear me?
No.
I'm Shouting out for help!
Can you hear me?
Of course not.
I'm crying out for help.
Can you hear me?
I didn't think so...
I'm whispering for help
can you hear me ?
nope...I should quit trying.
"We're gathered here today, to mourn the loss of. . .
CAN YOU HEAR ME NOW?!
good...why is it that you can only hear my cry when it's not there?
I don't know ....you tell me...
Remember this the next time when you go to class;
pay attention to everyone everyday for it might be their last.
Just live your life day to day, don't let a minute pass you by;
but always keep your ears open for that one little helpless cry.
If you hear this little cry, don't ignore it, or tell it to wait;
because if you decide to wait too long, you might be too late.
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Re: Can You Hear Me Now???
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 04:58:23 PM AEST
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| I hear your cries. I've been where you are. It feels as if everyone around has someone to share their pain with, but you. This feeling never lasts forever. You have the best friend in the world with always. A pen and paper. Keep writing out all your anger and rage, and turn it into beautiful pieces of art. Wonderful poem. Peace be with you and your soul. |
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Re: Can You Hear Me Now???
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 05:57:30 PM AEST
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I've been where you are many many times. I think no matter what u think there always people that you can talk to. Keep yer chin up and don't let those times get u down. I think a lot of ppl can relate.
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Re: Can You Hear Me Now???
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by Zee on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 04:59:59 PM AEST
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Thats a sad but very nice poem expressing your feelings so openly! Nicely written!
Zee |
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