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sleep
Contributed by
adsalamon
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Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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To sleep, Oh to sleep
To rest your weary head
Try and find comfort in the dreams
The storyboard the mind reveals
The horror vision on every new page
To sleep, Oh to sleep
To close the world away
To shut out the living world
The warm up to death
The gentle introduction to the nothingness
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adsalamon
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2003-09-03 07:35:00]
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Re: sleep
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 07:41:03 PM AEST
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this was great I loved the last stanza and the last line in particular. keep on writing and posting you have a new fan!
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Re: sleep
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by polaris773 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 12:05:15 PM AEST
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| I liked the last line and that the poem was in bold |
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