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Broken
Contributed by
Lia
on
Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 07:16:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Stepping through the fog that surrounds me
I feel our breathes in sync
Clutching fate inside our white knuckled fists
Drenched in each other's cold, wet sweat
Chainlinking our dreams and paddlocking our souls
Embraced inside a lovers kiss
Eyes locked in a mesmerizing stare
Lying next to each other on a hard wood floor
Hiding away fears in pockets
Creeping sins from every corner
Led by only candlelight
Pressed into a mold of human flesh
Witnessing only the here and now
Foretelling the future saved for a later date
Take my heart
Take my love
Release my fear
Right here, right now
Don't take me to that cliff up high
To smash my love to rocks below
Take my hand
Take my soul
Lead me through your world tonight
And make me feel that urge to fight
Taking in the air you exhale
Lapping up the scents of love
Grasping hope with tangled fate
Hair entwined with fingers laced
Passions soar through walls of lust
Searching deep inside for us
Trailing down your precious neck
The sweat begins to pour again
Pouting lips meet sacred spots
Heart touching Heart we fall in love
Powerful hands with the softest touch
Naked souls outstretched to desires
Tonite you shall be broken
And released to become a part of me...
Copyright ©
Lia
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2002-08-14 07:16:40]
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Re: Broken
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by Mack22 on
Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 08:46:29 AM AEST
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All i can say is...
that poem is soooo good! |
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Re: Broken
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by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on
Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 09:06:05 AM AEST
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| Speechless Lia just speechless! |
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Re: Broken
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by anothermack22 on
Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 12:37:16 PM AEST
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| Scandelousssss...its great |
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Re: Broken
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 05:10:54 PM AEST
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This has to be my favourite of yours Lia...an amazing piece
Chrissie x |
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Re: Broken
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by chatabox on
Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 09:20:47 PM AEST
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| oh my.......I loved this, savage love, mmmmmmmmmm! |
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Re: Broken
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by MisterRight on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 07:13:47 AM AEST
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Mezmorizing... I felt I lost myself in this one. Truely an amazing write, so passionate, straight from the heart. I'd have to agree with Chrissie and say, this is my personal favorite of your writes!
Great Job!!!
Curtis |
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