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Darkest Of Night...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It used to be I existed,held only by loneliness
My closest friend was a shadow of emptiness
I walked the streets with solitude by my side
And only the wind dried all the tears I cried
Only in the darkness,in dreams did you show
Then in the morning light,I had to watch you go
Day after day,night followed night,I wept
All I had were fantasies,created while I slept
Always wishing for a love,a home where I could lay
Someone to give my every breath,how I hoped and prayed each day
I wandered aimlessly in circles,
Aways falling back amongst old friends
It seemed emptines,loneliness and solitude
Would be mine until the end
Then one night amid my dreams
I found nothing,you were gone
I searched every place I'd been with you
I felt lost and more alone
I didnt want the sun to find me
Nor did I have a need to stay asleep
I had nowhere left to turn to
Even my dreams I couldn't keep
Yet time moves on and I awoke
Another battle through the tears
All I could do was wait for night
And hope it took me far from here
*to be continued* :)
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LovingWhispers
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2003-09-03 02:35:00]
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Re: Darkest Of Night...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 02:39:14 AM AEST
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| Wow, I can't wait for the second part of this poem. What a marvelous poem. You are a beautiful poet. Marvelous poem! |
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Re: Darkest Of Night...
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 03:00:41 AM AEST
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wonderful poem and I can relate so much to it
waiting for the next part
Shari |
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Re: Darkest Of Night...
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 03:27:50 AM AEST
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| i didn't want the sun to find me...perfection in prose.......can't wait for the next part....... |
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Re: Darkest Of Night...
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 06:08:23 AM AEST
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| sad, but wonderfully written.. venkat |
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Re: Darkest Of Night...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 07:19:44 AM AEST
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Splendid write, Whispers... sad but well done.. looking forward to next part..
Jenni |
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Re: Darkest Of Night...
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 08:56:40 AM AEST
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this is painfully sad and beautiful at the same time, I can relate to this for sure. Each word reached out to me,lovely
michelle |
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Re: Darkest Of Night...
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 08:16:16 PM AEST
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Ooh I LOVE this!! It just sort of pulled me in... I can't wait to see part 2! Wonderfully written!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Darkest Of Night...
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by Rage on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 02:48:38 AM AEST
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| Painfully beautiful! That's all I have to say. Great write!!! |
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