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Mad at a whore
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Feel the blade
Cut the skin
You betrayed
This man again
You were wrong
I was right
Say so long
Say goodnight
Look confused
Don't admit
I'm not amused
Your throat I slit
Gasp for air
Caugh and choke
I don't care
I sit and smoke
Watch you bleed
Suffer in pain
This sight I need
Memories remain
Don't cheat the man
Like she was
Don't know the plan
Of what he does
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
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2003-09-03 02:05:00]
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Re: Mad at a whore
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 03:25:10 AM AEST
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| very dark....i'm sorry you were dealt the ultimate betrayal..........rise stronger........ |
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Re: Mad at a whore
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by Merry on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 12:03:02 PM AEST
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this is dark and angry - good - get it out of your system and move on. Life is full of crap - look for the good and you will find it.
merry
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Re: Mad at a whore
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 07:10:23 PM AEST
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I like and totally agree with yer comment bro, but I don't get how it relates to your poem don't get me wrong I loved the poem it was dark and bitter and I loved the rhyme scheme. I am sorry to hear that your leaving you'll definitely be missed.
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Re: Mad at a whore
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by Sheveg on
Monday, 28th June 2010 @ 01:44:07 PM AEST
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I don't like cheating men or women. You sure are mad. I hope things are better now.
Sherry |
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