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A Star
Contributed by
The_Poet
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Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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"Twinkle Twinkle sweet little star,
my heart wonders how big you are.
Up above my thoughts so high, like a twinkling star in my sky.
Over the hills and valleys of my life so vast
leaving across a trial so fast.
Always wondering how big you grew,
you were always the one I trusted from the few i knew and stood by me all through.
You were with my when I was high, and gave me the sense of being so nigh. You were with me when my heart was troubled, always made my laughter so doubled.
Alas my star, thats what you are, how i wish your light shone afar."
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2003-09-02 21:05:00]
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Re: A Star
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 10:09:52 PM AEST
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This is cute...loved the way you wrote this..the theme may be old but you have written it in a new perspective...
Jenni |
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Re: A Star
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by VampiricSuccubus on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 10:39:32 PM AEST
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| i love it... all i can say is wow |
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Re: A Star
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 04:57:25 AM AEST
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| It may have been an old theme, but you truly made it your own. This is a sign of true talent. Having the ability to take someone else's work reword it, and make your own. Great work! |
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Re: A Star
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 10:55:20 AM AEST
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| Very good ode. Ivy |
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Re: A Star
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by The_Poet on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 11:56:00 AM AEST
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| This Poem.. Is jus for my Bbbbbeeeeessstttt Friend "Veeny" She'z my "Mom" and I luv her soooooooooo much..!! This is Jus for you Veeny |
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Re: A Star
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 03:48:37 PM AEST
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| I am sure it will very soon - Damien |
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