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An Ode to the one I love
Contributed by
The_Poet
on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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"Like the moon hiding behind the clouds,
reflected in the clean waters of the lake,
your smile reminds me of the bright full moon night
in all its glory and charm. Makes me forget the world,
wish I could stay in this bliss for eternity.
Like the dew that trickles on the leaves in a warm summer night,
your laughter brings joy to my thirsty soul,
filling up a fountain of joy inside me that overflows.
The beauty of the flowers that dance to the winds,
stands no match to your gait.
Every step you take,
makes me jealous of the ground you walk on..
ohh how I wish I was the ground that was in your path,
i'd be better off than jus sit here n watch..."
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2003-09-02 20:05:00]
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Re: An Ode to the one I love
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 10:05:56 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc, Poet..this is a beautiful poem... I hope you showed the girl this poem...Looking forward to reading more..
Jenni |
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Re: An Ode to the one I love
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by PoloRM on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 11:20:53 PM AEST
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Welcome poet to YPDC
This is the right place to be.
Great poem very lovely ode
An even greater poet it does bode...
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Re: An Ode to the one I love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 03:51:00 PM AEST
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| This is a really good one, I liked it a lot - Damien |
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