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Denied
Contributed by
VampiricSuccubus
on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 06:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Sitting here feeling this
Pain in my heart
The love I have for you
This love which is
Denied by you
I feel so cold
Shut out, Locked out
Denied
by you, by me...
Shut out because
of something I have
no control over
I try to shut it out
Lock it out
Deny it, it just hurts more.
I've decided to wait
see what happens
Maybe we'll be something
Maybe we won't
Denied... I set myself
up for the pain
Hell I love you
If I get hurt, Maybe
I'll have something to
feel... no longer
Denied
Truely able to love you
or able to move on
without you
no longer denied
ready to love truely
or love again
no longer denied
I love you
No longer denied
Copyright ©
VampiricSuccubus
... [
2003-09-02 18:45:00]
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Re: Denied
(User Rating: 1 )
by The_Poet on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 07:55:56 AM AEST
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| Neat.!! Short and to the point. Hmm if whoever it was intended to reads it.. trust me.. it will Prick Him!! Keep it coming Vampire |
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Re: Denied
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 07:18:49 AM AEST
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Vampire,
I feel your pain! When I read your poem I could feel how you must have felt. Only good writings can do that to a person, and that was a good writing!
Oh yeah, and check out my poem if you come across it OK? "Two Pools (Kyle's Eyes)". It's my first one.
So anyways, awesome work,
keep writing,
JBelly |
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Re: Denied
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 12:27:05 PM AEST
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I liked it this sort of unique in its line structure and what not. I can relate to how u feel in some ways. You should write some more. Hope everything works out for ya.
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