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Contributed by
painted_echos
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Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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went to sleep early
woke up at four
by the start of the day
i’d like to sleep more
but where to begin
there’s so much to do
i started a list, now
it’s quarter of two
prioritized and
Color-coded it
laminated and framed it
now where to hang it
but where are the nails
and the hammer too
just need the stepladder
and i’m almost through
now it’s well past four
list making done
almost time for dinner
better put it on
five-thirty now and
dinner all cooked
course, that’s not on the list
believe me i looked
ok kids come eat
then clear your plate
going on seven now
and the list can wait
time to sit outside
see the sun set
and watch the kids playing
till there’s no light left
bath time and stories
kisses goodnight
it’s nine o’clock now so
yep, turn off the light
four o’clock this morn
started my day and
still so much to do but
i’d rather get laid
(sorry, but it rhymed!)
go to sleep early
no list tonight
start over tomorrow
yep, sure i will, right!
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Re: the list
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 02:41:15 PM AEST
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great I really loved this, good write
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Re: the list
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 04:59:08 PM AEST
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| I have to giggle a bit, a warm write. Crow |
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Re: the list
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 10:11:24 PM AEST
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| you have me giggling.....and given a choice of a list of "to dos" versus getting laid...well whaddu think??? great line...whether you intended it or not...it's perfect |
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Re: the list
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 10:25:49 PM AEST
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Great write...one I can identify with..lol....
Jenni |
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