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ReALiTy ChEcK
Contributed by
StAiN
on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Have you sacrificed risk for consequence?
Or forgotten how to be untamed & extreme?
Or have you held onto the spark that makes life?
Are you still fighting against the mainstream?
Failure is losing touch
So don't let the mad thrills in life fade
rise up, embarrass yourself, be erratic!
where's the fun in standing in the shade?
Learn to see from an uncommon angle
Journey through town in unfamiliar boots
Accept unorthodox opinions & ways of living
Discover alternate life and death routes
Revolve around originality
study the pavement beneath bare feet
sway the supreme and plastic minds
unite only those who've accepted defeat
let IMPULSE be your guidance
RHAPSODY be your goal
IMPACT be your follower
and REVITALISED be your soul
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StAiN
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2003-09-01 21:05:00]
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Re: ReALiTy ChEcK
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by painted_echos on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 12:45:52 AM AEST
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| i really liked this...good advice and well written. like the way it lets me see myself as more of a free soul. |
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Re: ReALiTy ChEcK
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 02:02:05 AM AEST
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Supurb write!
I luv the name and how u play with your words.
It's alll good!
PEACE, JOY, LUV-N-REALITY CHECK,
emy |
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Re: ReALiTy ChEcK
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 02:02:45 AM AEST
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Supurb write!
I luv the name and how u play with your words.
It's alll good!
PEACE, JOY, LUV-N-REALITY CHECK,
emy |
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Re: ReALiTy ChEcK
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by VampiricSuccubus on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 05:07:21 AM AEST
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| I love this poem, your a great poet, I love how you speak of steriotypes and popularity and the mainstreem... it's great... expecially for the Self-proclaimed-anti-mainstreemers |
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Re: ReALiTy ChEcK
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by stargazer on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 10:01:55 AM AEST
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I would much rather be a nobody and get somewhere with a smile on my face, than be a somebody and get nowhere with tears streaming down my cheeks
I have nothing left to say. This poem was amazing. And you... you are a rare poet, never lose sight of that.
amy |
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