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I Wish
Contributed by
Britt
on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I wish we would always be together
I wish it would last forever
but that can't be
'cuz there isn't even a "we"
that's all fantasy, 'cuz you love somebody
and that somebody isn't me
you're always in my dreams
and in my dreams we're a team
I wish it were true
'cuz I really do love you
but I don't know of my feelings for you
'cuz I am scared to tell you
I've wished for a lot of things
but most off all I wish you were with me
~*~ I wish dreams became wishes
and wishes became true
'cuz in my dreams I'm always wif you! ~*~
Copyright ©
Britt
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2003-09-01 16:05:00]
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Re: I Wish
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by Saira on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 04:54:28 PM AEST
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I hope your wishes come true. This is a very lovely write. Good job!
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Re: I Wish
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 06:37:09 PM AEST
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very lovely write...may your wishes come true
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Re: I Wish
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 04:52:30 PM AEST
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| THIS IS GOOD ALSO. I WISH YOU COULD WRITE ME A PEOM BUT YOU DONT EVEN KNOW ME SO I THINK THATS A NO |
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