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Sonnet To Spring
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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How lovely lies this gentle season's face,
upon the fields and plains that fore were cold.
Renewing life for trees and kind with grace,
her sway turns winter scenes to days of gold.
Now she stirs amid mountain peaks on high,
oft melting snow to glisten streams and lakes.
This breeze that rustles sylvan glade with sigh,
returns to home the geese and mallard drakes.
The ocean's fury quiet close to shore,
responds in like to sweet Elysian dreams.
The sailor keeps appointment times once more,
and trollers ply their trade again in teams.
Springtime with great imbuing grace to heal,
your humble peasants deign this time to kneel.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2003-09-01 09:05:00]
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Re: Sonnet To Spring
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 07:11:07 PM AEST
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beautiful imagery
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Re: Sonnet To Spring
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 08:35:31 AM AEST
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Ramfire,
This is a Masterpiece you know...
You developed your theme just so!
Beautiful scene of colors and nature.
I've never read a more beautiful poem!
lovingcritters
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Re: Sonnet To Spring
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by EternitysLyre on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 05:02:56 AM AEST
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surprised to see someone else tried the impossible task of writing a sonnet. It's well written, but much unfortunately it doesn't have a perfect beat. The imagery is fantastic, and if you ever write another sonnet (which i doubt, as they're bad enough to write once), I'm sure it'll be even better.
"Elliptical words for intangible reasons; Elusive mirages of illusional seasons"
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