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A peek into heaven.
Contributed by
kay-p-m-devenish
on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
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A little peek at heaven
was in my dream last night
everything was beautiful
everything was right
we skipped on stars together
we cartwheeled on a cloud
we ring a ring a rosied
with angels singing loud.
The both of us were sparkling
the both of us were bright
in that
'Little Peek'
of heaven
in my dream....last night.
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2003-09-01 06:35:00]
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Re: A peek into heaven.
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 09:00:05 AM AEST
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Hi friend,
This is just heavenly writing!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
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Re: A peek into heaven.
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by joydeep_nath on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 09:54:14 AM AEST
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hmm good write man pert warm cool soothing
try reading my poem of mornings past... |
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Re: A peek into heaven.
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by Rage on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 10:38:49 AM AEST
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Wow, Kay, this is just lovely! So beautiful and yet, leaves me a tinge of sadness...
Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~ |
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Re: A peek into heaven.
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:40:09 PM AEST
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Oh Kay, this is one of your most beautiful pieces... I love it!!
Hugs
Jenni |
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