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And Then There Were Two (part 2)
Contributed by
Jason_Robert_Britt
on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The gamut of emotion,
Salutes the salient;
Stand aside weary lover,
The Saint has bigger plans!
Inflate the perverse,
The fiction of self worth;
Procure this sad gift,
The Voice has stronger hands.
Like the addict's needle,
Innocence turns fatal;
One draw of ambition,
Good intentions fall apart.
The Saint is a banner,
Of man-made manner;
Reverse the mandate,
So all dreams can start.
Copyright ©
Jason_Robert_Britt
... [
2003-09-01 04:05:00]
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Re: And Then There Were Two (part 2)
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by shelby on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 09:46:59 AM AEST
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great job it draws me right in
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Re: And Then There Were Two (part 2)
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by Saira on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:54:06 PM AEST
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Awesome!
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Re: And Then There Were Two (part 2)
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 08:19:52 PM AEST
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I loved this very poetic and well put together. keep on writing man and pouring out your thoughts.
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Re: And Then There Were Two (part 2)
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by Bizzy on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 10:09:49 PM AEST
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Jason, keep on writing. You come from a different situation than I do, so I have difficulty understanding how the words relate to an experience. That doesn't mean that your poetry is not good, I'm sure it is.
Praying for good things in your life. Bizzy |
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Re: And Then There Were Two (part 2)
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by Archie on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 06:08:44 AM AEST
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Hmm another thoughtful poem or rather thought provoking.
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