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Dream
Contributed by
crimsontearz
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Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The love we had
Was all a Dream
You told me it was all ok
I'd always be safe
I wouldnt have to worry about anything
You would take care of me
I gave up things for you
I struggled to make our relationship perfect
Sacrificing friendships
So many tears cried for you
Our love was nothing
A dream is all it was
A mere fantasy
Nothing that good would happen
Struggling to make it work
Fighting for what i thought was love
But now i've woke up
The dream is over
Our love is..
Gone...
Copyright ©
crimsontearz
... [
2003-08-31 21:05:00]
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Re: Dream
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:52:52 PM AEST
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| i like the rambling feel of this....makes me want to say it all in one breath.....this is good work.. |
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Re: Dream
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 10:08:08 PM AEST
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I can relate 2 this many times over.
Very good, strong, moving write!
Hang tuff.
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
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Re: Dream
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 10:37:04 PM AEST
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Wow... sounds just like a "relationship" I had once. Some things just aren't meant to be. Great poem.
~ Moonlit |
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