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To leave me this
Contributed by
crow
on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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A winters day,
to remind me of warmth.
A thought of love,
to remember the heartache.
A cloudless sky,
one summers rain.
A tear to shed
from aging eyes.
Your hand to hold,
to share humanity.
I venture close,
placing my hand in her`s.
And listen to stories
from an aging woman.... Crow
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... [
2003-08-31 17:45:00]
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Re: To leave me this
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by painted_echos on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 05:51:28 PM AEST
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| your heart shows through |
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Re: To leave me this
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 07:10:04 PM AEST
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wonderful
Shari |
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Re: To leave me this
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:10:24 PM AEST
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Oh how sweet and tender Crow.
You are the only one I know that would do such a thing.
Loving, kind poem
lovingcritters
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Re: To leave me this
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by shelby on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:23:23 PM AEST
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a tender moment in this poem and your a tender kind hearted man Crow you really are.Loved these words.
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Re: To leave me this
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:49:06 PM AEST
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the education and knowledge we receive....for not a penny......if we'd just listen.....unselfishly listen.....this is beautiful......reminds me of my many nights.....just smiling and listening....
i so look forward to your work.... |
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Re: To leave me this
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 10:48:00 PM AEST
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Such compassion-n-luv.
If everyone thought like this there wouldn't be nursing homes.
Awesome!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
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Re: To leave me this
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 01:46:03 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful and tender write....
Jenni |
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Re: To leave me this
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:02:19 AM AEST
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Tender,loving and heart-felt words.Great write.
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Re: To leave me this
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by stargazer on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:52:03 PM AEST
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| If only we could understand the beauty of words and the meaning they hold to be true. I can't even begin to describe what this poem has done for me. A man can talk... but can he ever just listen? //amy// |
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Re: To leave me this
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 04:52:14 AM AEST
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We listen,we learn,we teach.
Just as you have..I will too.I will listen to your words,your heart,I will learn from your wisdom and thoughtfulness..In your time here,you have taught me so much..Thank you! :)
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Re: To leave me this
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by PoloRM on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 12:21:57 PM AEST
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The aging woman has left you treasure
Its use is more than just for leisure
Keep her wisdom close at heart
You can use it in your art...
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Re: To leave me this
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by FireStarter on
Sunday, 8th May 2016 @ 05:57:20 PM AEST
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| awe just wonderful |
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