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Daddy`s Little Girl
Contributed by
crow
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Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 04:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Daddy`s little girl has come home to rest,
buttons and bows a long ago myth.
Tortured spirit, twisted and black,
everything nice is not to be.
Late in the night she rises again,
filling a need, terror thrives.
Daddy`s little girl searches the dreams,
no sugar and spice, indidious laugh.
The beconing call, from a venomous lair.
evil comes home to haunt the birth... Crow.
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crow
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2003-08-31 16:25:00]
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Re: Daddy`s Little Girl
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 04:42:08 PM AEST
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Crow, as you know I can't read "spookiness"
Gives me goosepimples and uneasiness.
I didn't find this dark as much as cold...
Cold hard facts,tortured spirit, love lacks.
Oh, Yes Crow, I hear you, and it has so many meanings to me
No one will see what I see..
Everyone will find a different meaning to be...
I loved It. Crow....you write so few words
and yet you say it all. Sign of high intelligence.
I love the "venomous Lair"
That in itself gave me quite a scare!
Wonderful!
lovingcritters
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Re: Daddy`s Little Girl
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 05:43:00 PM AEST
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it's dark.........menacing and unforgiving.......a feel like i'm waiting for his darkness now to make it as scary as mine was......
evil comes home to haunt the birth.........yes!!! |
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Re: Daddy`s Little Girl
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by painted_echos on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 05:43:57 PM AEST
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| yes, it is dark. as well it is beautiful. |
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Re: Daddy`s Little Girl
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 07:14:02 PM AEST
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My friend once again you use so few words to haunt the depths of the soul
Shari |
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Re: Daddy`s Little Girl
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by shelby on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:30:38 PM AEST
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yes this is dark and has its own beauty hanging in there as well you captivated me once again.
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Re: Daddy`s Little Girl
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:06:25 AM AEST
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| Classic dark,sortta like those old silent horror flicks.Few words,but still frightening. |
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Re: Daddy`s Little Girl
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 05:33:13 AM AEST
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| I reada lot of books...all kinds..and this would be perfect between the covers of a very deep and dark secretive write.I know I would be kept and held captive by your words.You excel in all you do...in so few drops of ink. :)BRAVO!! |
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