|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Such Beauty
Contributed by
ramfire
on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
|
A flower garden seems the greatest place to be.
Such beauty seen in roses, dahlias, lilies grown.
And I do like the labor raising these you see,
for they respond with loving shades of colors sown.
There's peace and happy presence waiting me someday,
when I can take the pleasure walking close to Thee.
Redeemer mine, forever may it be this way,
together stroll a cottage garden made for me.
Small cottage having no distinguished sight to view,
just loving mate who waits for me and seeks to please.
A better wholesome wife in life man never knew,
who strove to keep our humble home and pay the lease.
Such beauty seen in Master, mate, and flowers bright,
assures a future life, not endless, sleepless night.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Copyright ©
ramfire
... [
2003-08-31 09:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Such Beauty
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 10:38:28 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Ramfire this is remarkable!! A lovely garden and a humble cottage with a lovely woman what more could one ask for.I love it thanks for sharing.A perfect poem for a Sunday morn.
Michelle |
|
|
Re: Such Beauty
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 10:47:28 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wonderful as always a well painted picture
Shari |
|
|
Re: Such Beauty
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 04:53:58 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Dear Ramfire,
You named your poem just right
You surrounded yourself with beauty and light. I too could feel his presence...
As he guided you in your garden,i detacted his love essence.
So peaceful, so satisfied with what he's given you!
Your priorities are certainly in place
Drop out of the material race....
Simple things are beautiful....like looking into your mates face and seeing the reflection of your love in her eyes!
Beautiful poem, thank you for reminding me!
lovingcritters
connie |
|
|
Re: Such Beauty
(User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 11:15:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow, really nice poem ... enjoyed this very much ... Jan |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
