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Become
Contributed by
Lele
on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 07:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Snake walks
around trees.
Could be a person
become it?
Birds sing their songs
and fly away around world.
Could be a person
fly away and feel independent
in this world?
The tiger fights
for its life.
Could be person
fight, only, for his or her own survival?
Many questions,
Somes anwers are right
(Snakes and men have the same mind).
Somes are wrong
(The men never will be on freedom).
And there are sames doubts
(when the men are going to thinks in the others?).
Copyright ©
Lele
... [
2003-08-31 07:45:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Become
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:49:01 PM AEST (User
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Dear L:ele, I was with you all the way on that one. Wonderful poem. Comparing man to animals even the Bible does that. says if you are gruff you have the personality of a bear etc. I enjoyed it Lele...do it again.
Love,
lovingcritters
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