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the real god
Contributed by
maha_ak49
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Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 02:25:00 AM in AEST
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the real god,
are humans,
who follows his teachings,
god listens,
but he never helps,
reaching heaven,
is by lending hands,
meditations,
a waste of time,
only sincere helps,
will lift us,
to heaven,
so,
pull those in traps,
with your holy hands,
and,
the One wil open the bridge,
to heaven.
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Re: the real god
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by ravenfire on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 02:57:46 AM AEST
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| scary poem. look around you, if humans are Gods, then we are all doomed. |
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Re: the real god
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 05:15:17 AM AEST
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| i feel god is love...and love is always helpful...good start...i'd like to see you expand on this!!!! |
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Re: the real god
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 11:32:34 AM AEST
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The true God could never be human
For humans die and return to the dust,
The God, the Creator, never dies, that's a must.
To watch over his creation, especially man,
The True God is watching and seeing all that he can.
You are right though in this respect...humans make themselves Gods, and dominate and control....but a real God does none of those things....He is a God of Love of Freedom to console.
lovingcritters
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Re: the real god
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by Dina on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 06:55:21 AM AEST
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| What are you trying to say here? God is above all, people are just human beings who are slaves to GOD. |
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