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And Then There Were Two (part 1)
Contributed by
Jason_Robert_Britt
on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Nirvana is a ruse,
A mirage in bitterness;
Rumage through isolation,
Reflecting no free choice.
Psycological rapture,
The image has been captured;
Miraculous healing through,
The power of some voice.
Exchange of impulse,
The Savage Saint breathes;
This pitiless pope,
Sinking tongue into def ears.
Emerging from betrayal,
Intending to prevail;
The Watchers look away,
At the hour of their fear.
Copyright ©
Jason_Robert_Britt
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2003-08-31 01:05:00]
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Re: And Then There Were Two (part 1)
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 02:35:06 AM AEST
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Dude this was awesome. It should have been longer (but I guess thats why this is Part I eh). I loved the last stanza I was struck with fear and foreboding. Great job I'm looking forward to Part II.
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Re: And Then There Were Two (part 1)
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by Saira on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 03:22:25 PM AEST
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Wow...wonderful read. Waiting to read the other part...Terrific job! By the way, I checked out your site, it's good =o)
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Re: And Then There Were Two (part 1)
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by Saira on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 03:23:08 PM AEST
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Wow...wonderful read. Waiting to read the other part...Terrific job! By the way, I checked out your site, it's good =o)
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