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American Youth
Contributed by
jacquelynne
on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
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Deepened, darkened hearts
severed by the memories
made distorted from the pain
oppressed, depressed, pressured & harmed
Rules and anger, lies & deception
shatter us, hate us, but never love us
simply forget us,
the Youth of America
Copyright ©
jacquelynne
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2003-08-30 19:05:00]
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Re: American Youth
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 11:33:08 PM AEST
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| Short but meaningful. I'm entranced by the line "severed by the memories". Excellent poem. |
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Re: American Youth
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by venkat on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:45:20 AM AEST
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| A good write. venkat |
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Re: American Youth
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:11:20 PM AEST
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Hmm this was good it could have been longer, but I think the shortness of it makes ppl think more. Great write and sadly true.
Bobo (Joel) |
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