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Barbed Wire Fantasies
Contributed by
crimson_purity
on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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An uneasy sense of urgency,
Showers into the neon plated darkness of my mind,
Barbed wire fantasies, the ecstasy of imagery,
Protection from no-mans' land, my territory,
Trespassing on stolen feelings,
Dreaming of the noose around my milky white neck,
Tightning, a claw like hand, savouringly, around my throat,
Unadulterated, bliss, a black orgasmic moment,
Then nothing.
Once again, I abscond from my earthly body,
Drowning in it's dark red grace, still entwined, scars,
Distant memories of the blade, embrace my thirst,
Delighting me.
Once more, before I am forced to leave,
The ancient sword of time, raping me,
Tearing at my insides, ripping me, chastised,
I return.
But to what? Another day of vomit hued memories,
Never again.
I refuse.
No,
Twist fantasies into reality,
I embark on my abyssful last stand,
An eternal coma,
Bitter destruction
Of worthless self, forever,.
Please........
Just one more time.
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crimson_purity
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2003-08-30 13:45:00]
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Re: Barbed Wire Fantasies
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 12:02:11 AM AEST
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| Well, this was interesting. Good write. |
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Re: Barbed Wire Fantasies
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 12:03:29 AM AEST
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| unadulterated, bliss, a black orgasmic moment.....wow.....this is good!!!! tearing at my insides....yes!!!!!! |
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Re: Barbed Wire Fantasies
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:45:50 AM AEST
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Wow, this is deep, but really clever and i love its twists and turns. Beautiful honey..
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Re: Barbed Wire Fantasies
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by SpreadYourWings on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 01:28:27 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this poem as I have felt this way too. Beautiful write. |
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Re: Barbed Wire Fantasies
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 05:24:32 AM AEST
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| The angst with which tis poem was written is awesome. The depression and rage at the outside world is tantalizing. Not very many writers would ever travel that deep into their souls. Talent and guts. Awesome,simply awesome. |
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Re: Barbed Wire Fantasies
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:06:51 PM AEST
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VERY VERY good... I loved this you have a way with words and getting across your message. Never stop it would be indeed a tragedy.
Bobo (Joel) |
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