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Can you See? Can you see?
Contributed by
Jessica_Saini
on
Friday, 12th July 2002 @ 04:18:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Look at a girl in Les Paris.
Can’t you see she’s as smart as can be?
Look at her life, can you see? Can you see?
Just how lonely one person can be?
Look at her friends with boys and make-up.
And the very short skirts guys like to look up.
Look at their lives, can you see? Can you see?
Just how different lifestyles can be?
Look at her soul. Look at her mask.
For a real friend, is all she will ask.
Look how they treat her. Can you see? Can you see?
Just how fake real friends shouldn’t be?
Look at the bottles and look at her life,
Can’t you see she’s ending her strife?
Look at her tears, can you see? Can you see?
Just how fragile human life can be?
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Jessica_Saini
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2002-07-12 16:18:57]
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Re: Can you See? Can you see?
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by Elz_A_S on
Friday, 12th July 2002 @ 04:52:43 PM AEST
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| very true, very true... |
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Re: Can you See? Can you see?
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by SuicidalSon on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 11:05:22 AM AEST
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| I really like this its almost as if you were writing from the heart not about some girl you heard about |
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