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Contributed by
crow
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Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sometimes love is so unkind,
hearts stay broken, and hearts can mend.
So many tears that we can cry,
starting over, the fears reborn.
Holding on to the pieces
of a world torn apart,
silently wiping the tears away.
borrowed time,
a pleading end.
Never wanting to surrender
to a love`s last dance... Crow
Copyright ©
crow
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2003-08-29 22:05:00]
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 10:31:21 PM AEST
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totally breathtaking, so few words such strength
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 01:32:51 AM AEST
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this is so powerful....your words wrap me in the strength......
starting over, the fears reborn....yes!!!!....over and over again!!!! |
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by painted_echos on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 02:08:31 AM AEST
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well, i think that any comment i make, will fall so short of adequate. i read one of your poems yesterday, and immediately went to read more. your writing, evokes emotion, as you lay your heart bare. there is true compassion in your words. this one touched me; the last two lines finished me off. so i'll read more...
you are gifted, crow. don't stop writing, and thanks for sharing. m |
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by shelby on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 04:25:12 PM AEST
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this is lovely and so very true you moved me with this poem Crow you really did.
Michelle |
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by Saira on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 08:15:54 PM AEST
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Very nicely done Crow. Liked it a lot!
Saira |
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 02:21:42 AM AEST
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| Good write ... words so true... Jan |
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 05:49:53 AM AEST
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| I printed this one out...read it by the fire.You inspire me so much.My tears are real as they fall...yet my smile cannot be contained.You touch me in every way possible.Lovely...sad yet so lovely! |
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