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-Red Tide-
Contributed by
gem48
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Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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From the point of entry
A chill progresses through,
Shockwaves hit the soul in a red tide,
Paralysing the outer shell,
Just for a second,
The spinning world stops,
Yet the ocean still ebbs and flows,
Birds still cry,
Wolves still howl at the weeping moon,
Souls surrendered
Blades still scar.
Another trust lost.
Copyright ©
gem48
... [
2003-08-29 09:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: -Red Tide-
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 10:32:45 AM AEST (User
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i needed to read this tonight.....perfect....descriptive of a heart breaking.... |
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Re: -Red Tide-
(User Rating: 1 ) by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 03:03:52 PM AEST (User
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Very good. Very real. |
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