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Slipping Through A Bloody Hourglass
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 07:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The broken pieces of me cover the floor
And you don't care about me
I turn away and cry into my pillow
And you pretend not to see
I'm breaking up inside until nothing's left
I'm screaming at you so loud but you've gone deaf
Everybody's putting me last
(Even me)
And I'm about to crash
(Please catch me)
The only one who loves me now
Can't be here
And no one understands
You leave me here
Please don't leave me
There would be nothing left but an empty sky
That stretches on forever
Just a big aching hole with nowhere to go
One pointless life to sever
Cut out my life with the broken shards of glass
I slip through the cracks of a bloody hourglass
My crushing tears might bring you down
If they do
Well I guess it's my fault
'Cause I knew
I have to face the emptiness
(I can't hide)
It's just the way I feel
(I'm dead inside)
Don't let me die
Could I ask you to save me?
To try your best to understand me?
To love me when I disagree
And keep it under lock and key?
Is it okay to be this way?
Have I pushed you too far away?
I'm in pain day after day
So how can I act like I'm okay?
Can't you just hold me and let me cry?
For once not talk about you and I?
Stop trying to modify
The parts of me I justify
I'm tired now so let me sleep
Stay here with me while I weep
'Cause in my dreams my spirit leaps
But I'll stay strong if your heart I can keep
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-08-29 07:45:00]
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Re: Slipping Through A Bloody Hourglass
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by jaeann on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 07:52:07 AM AEST
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you echo everything i need to say to someone....wow!!!! i hope they hear us.....
awesome metaphor write!!!!! very powerful.... can just imagine the trance it put you under..... |
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Re: Slipping Through A Bloody Hourglass
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 03:23:49 PM AEST
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| Good job. The title is pure genius. |
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Re: Slipping Through A Bloody Hourglass
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by crimson_purity on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 03:26:24 PM AEST
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| I think this piece of writing is wonderful, it's amazing how things can trigger an intense emotional response, and make for such a beautiful write. |
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Re: Slipping Through A Bloody Hourglass
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 05:37:54 PM AEST
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| Another great write Moonlit... |
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