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Unfaithful
Contributed by
Aika
on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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my friend,
has just told me that
he was unfaithful
after all those years
his inside world
is no more that pure
i told him that
it was pretty bad
but on the contrary
we are alive to live
and to be faithful
since the first day
for long long years
is like
never try:
to drink or smoke
to drive fast or be coarse
to touch gold
if you do not have money
to be bought
he tried, I said do not be worried
hide inside your lil secret
and live like you lived before
cos you never know
if all around are really honest
and do not also hide the lil secret
if you want, repeat it and change your life
if do not want, hide it deep in your mind....
Copyright ©
Aika
... [
2003-08-29 07:05:00]
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Re: Unfaithful
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by jaeann on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 10:45:54 AM AEST
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i like your advice......
good write............ |
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Re: Unfaithful
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 06:01:38 PM AEST
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Lovely write...Aika...you can hide it in your mind, but what about your soul?
lovingcritters
Connie Sue |
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Re: Unfaithful
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 04:27:15 AM AEST
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| a wonderful poem, full of interesting thoughts and attitudes, paul |
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