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the thought
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
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if the thought slipped from my mind and fell to my heart
would you come to question my love
you are a victim to my desire
how easily i would complicate you if i you were not already
there is this thought, this fire,
and it consumes me
so its perfectly fine for me to feel with my heart and not with my mind
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Re: the thought
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by jaeann on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 07:44:06 AM AEST
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| so simplistic....so consuming....great write!!! |
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Re: the thought
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 05:51:54 PM AEST
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"its perfectly fine for me to feel with my heart and not with my mind" - love that line! Remind me to show this to my boyfriend sometime. *Rolls eyes* Anyways, great poem. I love the victim to my desire line too.. hehe.. ;)
~ Moonlit |
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