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Distorted Lullabye
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 02:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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"Black sheep, black sheep
we have one simple request"....
"No sir! No sir!
Too heavy on my chest."
"Black sheep, black sheep
we plead of you to try!"....
"I know sir, but I don't care sir,
you know my reasons why!"
"Black sheep, black sheep
her time is running short"...
"So what sir! Oh well sir,
my life I won't abort!"
"Black sheep, black sheep
we're here with open arms"...
"Ha sir! A load of crap sir!
Me...You cannot charm!"
"Black sheep, black sheep
she's slipping so very fast"...
"I don't care sir, not really sir...
from her life I was cast!"
"Black sheep, black sheep
she's gone now from your life"...
"Good sir! Great sir!
she'll cause me no more strife!"
"Black sheep, black sheep
all you're asking for is dollars?"
"You owe me sir...monetarily console me sir!
though it's someone else who hollars!"
"Black sheep, black sheep
the please pay for me some debt!"
"No thank you sir! Changed my mind sir!
I'm all cool and set!"
Black sheep, black sheep
was indeed a little fool.....
Yes sir! Yes sir!
A lifetime full!
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-08-29 02:25:00]
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Re: Distorted Lullabye
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by venkat on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 05:24:56 AM AEST
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| very cute.. venkat |
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Re: Distorted Lullabye
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by Crow on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 06:49:22 AM AEST
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the words that drag things out of the dark for me, almost personal for me. what a write,
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Re: Distorted Lullabye
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 08:04:53 AM AEST
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| Very personal, yet at the same time it's charming. |
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Re: Distorted Lullabye
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by krismisevski on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 10:05:34 PM AEST
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I like your idea here. Flows nicely. Great ending. Well done.
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Re: Distorted Lullabye
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 8th September 2020 @ 07:33:34 PM AEST
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| Very charming indeed. |
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