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CALIFORNIA BAY
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can see the lights off the bay
twinkle in a way
turn to you and say
I'll love you every day!
I can feel the breeze off the bay
what a beautiful day
a walk with you if I may
on the sand we will stay.
I can feel the sun off the bay
sandy beach lay
never more to stray
hot liquid sun rays.
Come what may
just for today
with you I'm
gonna play.
Copyright ©
jaeann
... [
2003-08-29 01:05:00]
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Re: CALIFORNIA BAY
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 02:28:40 AM AEST
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Real cute!!
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Re: CALIFORNIA BAY
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by venkat on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 05:28:03 AM AEST
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| lovely.. venkat |
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Re: CALIFORNIA BAY
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by Crow on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 06:57:40 AM AEST
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| this is bright! I feel all better now. good poem, Crow |
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Re: CALIFORNIA BAY
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by POOBEAR on
Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 11:47:24 AM AEST
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I like, I like!!!
The last four lines are really great!
Sounds like a great day.
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