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Paper Heart
Contributed by
crow
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Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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She whispered in the turmoil
she pulled you from,
she would not stay forever.
But you know she would have.
At the last edge of your life
she held you from stepping off,
you were safe in the angel`s arms.
Love warmth and strength
she passed to you.
And you........with a paper heart. Crow
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2003-08-28 22:25:00]
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Re: Paper Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 11:01:16 PM AEST
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| i love this poem, very very much, i am compelled to say awwwww! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Paper Heart
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 11:30:08 PM AEST
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| This poem has great depth ... very good write.... Jan |
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Re: Paper Heart
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 12:25:18 AM AEST
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very good write, brought tears to my eyes, touched me very much
Shari |
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Re: Paper Heart
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by jaeann on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 06:12:05 AM AEST
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| i keep reading this over and over.....this is so real.........touching.... |
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Re: Paper Heart
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by Saira on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 08:17:22 PM AEST
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Wonderful and the best one read I read tonight. Loved it!
Saira |
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Re: Paper Heart
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 05:58:46 AM AEST
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| I can hear you speaking these words.You are so knowing and gentle.Its always a pleasure to read your poetry. ~:*wa do*:~ |
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Re: Paper Heart
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by Archie on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 06:15:00 PM AEST
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| We often put our lives or should I say hearts in the hads of others, very good poem |
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