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Teenage angst
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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So this is my teenage angst.
The days I am meant to dream of suicide
Well this angst sure does hurt, and I guess I have learnt
that it is hard to live through the eyes of a teen,
when everyone seems to want to dampen your dreams,
when everyone seems to go form teams,
leaving you all alone.
A victim of stereotypical glances,
mental abuse I keep on taking my chances.
Isolating my self from the outside world,
trapping myself in my room.
Writing poetry for hours and hours on end, trying to fufil my gloom.
Listening to angry females and emotive men,
bleeding from my heart armed with a pen.
However I release my tension, I do not forget to dream,
I will not let the world walk over me just because I'm only 15.
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2003-08-28 09:45:00]
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Re: Teenage angst
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by Aika on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 10:27:18 AM AEST
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This poem caused
that i forgot
i am 30 already
i returned back in my teen
and felt the same as thee
How wonderful poem
real words from heart
keeping fingers crossed for ya!!!!
Really wonderful, please do not stop being yourself.. you seem to be great:-)
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Re: Teenage angst
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by Broken-glass on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 10:37:26 AM AEST
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| Thank you so much! What a nice thing to say, it means so much to me to know my poetry can affect people like that. Kudos to you ;-) |
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Re: Teenage angst
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 05:04:54 PM AEST
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| hi broken glass i totally agree and understand the way u feel! i think that most ppl our age can relate 2 this poem. its really good! i love the line ''a victim of stereotypical glances'' as it seems to sum up life in school completely! keep writing and keep dreaming ;-) xxxx |
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Re: Teenage angst
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 11:27:10 AM AEST
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| wow. seriously good anyd i think loadsa teenagers including myself can relate to it... |
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Re: Teenage angst
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by knowWhat_kind on
Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 04:15:25 PM AEST
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| I truely feel the same way but take out the part about killing myself i don't feel taht way,but that was really great how you wrote that down i love it |
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