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Reflection
Contributed by
M
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Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 07:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Brake all the mirrors,
I can´t bare to see that face,
Shut all the curtains, turn off all the lights,
No one can see if it´s dark in this place.
If we´re ever at a river or the like,
Send ripples through the calm,
Don´t let the natural distortion of my being
Be what disturbs the tranquil charm.
Black out all the roads and walls,
My shadow´s just another part of this curse.
If you ever catch me with a shard of broken window in my hand,
Please, no one call a nurse.
This reflection haunts my memories,
My dreams are tainted too,
But don´t try to fix me,
There is nothing you can do.
Copyright ©
M
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2003-08-27 07:45:00]
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Re: Reflection
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 08:08:56 PM AEST
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| baby...i'm always here...if i could take your tears and cry them for you, i would, and if i could take your pain, and carry it as my own, i would...i love you, i'm always here, xxx |
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Re: Reflection
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 09:44:20 PM AEST
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what can i say after that? only that im here for you too, emily, i always have been, always will be. Im thinking of you hun..
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Re: Reflection
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 01:35:57 AM AEST
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| dearest emily, big hugs n' lotsa love, nessa xx |
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Re: Reflection
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 05:22:27 AM AEST
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This was very well written and I liked the rhyme scheme. I wish you and Lucie didn't have to feel so much pain, but to know I am a part of that it kills me. I wish I could take it all away... I really mean that.
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Re: Reflection
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 10:57:09 PM AEST
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| This is one of the most beautiful poems I've read. Your true feelings bleed through your words like wine. Pain never lasts forever. |
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