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Love, my suicide
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
on
Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 06:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I used to lie awake and breathe in the night’s velvet promises
Wishing on silver stars that this life was eternal
Leaving gentle fingerprints on the glass as I gazed into the moonlit innocence
And I would weep at the beauty of this
And let it flow throughout my spirit
And I would crave for it to cleanse my soul and make me pure
As my immortal lay softly by my side
And kissed away my senses
Surrendering my everything to this
My life, inhale my soul
(Breathe…)
And I would lie in your arms in these candlelit hours
And I would give my mind to you, body and soul
Whispering incandescent promises, words I never knew
Healing my eyes with the tears of love you gave me
Washing away my hurt, cleansing my truth
And I would lose myself to you
And convince myself this love would never fade
My guardian angel, my saving grace
My life, purify my soul
(I loved you then)
But now I lie awake and choke on all these shattered, torn memories
Wishing with my blistered heart this life would end
Smudging bloodstained fingerprints as I stare into this blurred darkness
And now I cry at the ugly fear of this
And let the poison crawl throughout my veins
And I crave for the bleach to dye my soul and make me pure
As my desire lay dying by my side
And rips away my defences
Leaving me with nothing
But my death, exhale my soul…
And now…
And now I lay by myself in these darkened hours
And I cry myself to sleep, weary in body and soul
Shouting torn and shattered lies, words you never knew
Hurting my eyes with the tears of hate I gave myself
Tearing away my sunlight, bleach my hurt
And now I forget myself for you
And convince myself this pain will never fade
I killed my guardian angel, my saving grace
And now my death, crucify my soul
(It was all for you)
(I’m sorry)
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2003-08-27 06:25:00]
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Re: Love, my suicide
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by M on
Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 11:11:40 AM AEST
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If my blood were pure, Lucie, i would drain it and give it to you, if only it would help you breathe. I love you, and i will say it every day. I promised you once that this would all go away, and it will.
I love you. |
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Re: Love, my suicide
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 01:44:01 PM AEST
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ooo, this is intense... alot of emotion in here
good job... I hope you heal.
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Re: Love, my suicide
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 03:21:34 PM AEST
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Lucie, This poem is...well breathtakingly beautiful so strong just like you Lucie...
Love you and will always be with you hun
Love 'n Hugs 'n Kisses
- Becca |
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Re: Love, my suicide
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 07:56:06 PM AEST
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| dearest lucie, this is one of your most stunning writes! i simply love how you did this, truely shows your talent:) big hugs n' lotsa love, always nessa x |
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Re: Love, my suicide
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 10:05:20 PM AEST
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my breath is flying away.. there are no words... i hate to think of you like that, like this.. hold tight lu, and things will get better, they have to get better..
x_x_x |
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Re: Love, my suicide
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 12:51:29 PM AEST
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| This is filled with such torment, yet beautifully written ... simply an awesome write. ... Jan |
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Re: Love, my suicide
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 12:56:40 PM AEST
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Wonderful write, such desolation. So dreadfully well captured. Brings to mind something I promised myself when I was an RAF pilot.
'Never sacrifice more than half of today for tomorrow and never sacrifice any of today for yesterday.'
bob |
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Re: Love, my suicide
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 07:48:23 PM AEST
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This is brilliant... stunning... breathtaking... poetry at its best, and that's the honest truth. But conceived from such pain... I ached inside when I read this, I really did. I truly hope you find peace and allow yourself to heal. Hold on to what you have and let go of what you've lost. You'll be in my thoughts Lucie, you've touched me tremendously with this exquisite piece of work. Blessed be.
~ Dee |
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Re: Love, my suicide
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by eternityandaday4u on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 12:22:42 AM AEST
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| this is pure to the heart and very awesome write! it gave me the chills it is breathtakingly great! you will go on. no matter what mountain you have to climb you will over come. you can break the barrier and throw your hardships away!! i beleive in your hope and i hope that you heal and move on! but always remember you are worth every bit you think you are! |
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Re: Love, my suicide
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by Fairy on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 02:10:40 PM AEST
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| This was so breath taking... so intense.. keep up the good work... sorry about your broken heart, I hope eventually it will mend. |
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