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I'll never be beautiful
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I’ve been breathing for far too long
I’ve given up fighting, I was never that strong
Understand that I can’t go on like this
Can’t hold back my mind’s forever strong fist
I keep punishing myself for times gone wrong
I feel as though I’ll never belong
I’ll never be beautiful, never be like you
Don’t even start, you know it’s all true
I’m just biding my time, my life you can’t save
As I wait for my moment to go the grave
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2003-08-25 01:35:00]
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Re: I'll never be beautiful
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 02:36:51 AM AEST
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hey, this is treally good, i know how you feel and it SUUUUUUUUUUUUCKS! ALOT! but hang in there alright? nothing lasts forever! NOTHING! WOH HAHA! JUST WAIT! SOON IT WILL BE OVER! MUWAHAHAHAHA! bu6 we'll all still be alibve because we are survivors!!! nice poem, i loved it.
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Re: I'll never be beautiful
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 07:03:43 AM AEST
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This was great, yet very sad. I hope your 'moment' isn't for another 60 or 70 years. The depression will go away. Take care of yerself and keep safe.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: I'll never be beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th August 2003 @ 05:26:28 PM AEST
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| very good write. damien and ivy |
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Re: I'll never be beautiful
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by Aika on
Tuesday, 26th August 2003 @ 03:57:16 PM AEST
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I believe, you give up fight
only for a short while
without your fighting you would not
breath for far too long
and I wish you not to be sad
not to only wait
I wish you to live for a long
and I wish to hear you,
singing a happy song:-)
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Re: I'll never be beautiful
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by Merry on
Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 05:21:40 PM AEST
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| nice write - hope you really don't feel this way about yourself - life is an adventure - there's always something around the corner- good or bad - who knows - but aren't you curious - just a little - and as for looks - well they don't matter really - not to real people - it's what's inside that counts |
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Re: I'll never be beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 06:20:48 AM AEST
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| Great poem! |
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Re: I'll never be beautiful
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by Twinky on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 02:55:37 AM AEST
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| wow short and right to the point....... by the way everyone is beautiful!!! including you |
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Re: I'll never be beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 10:27:20 AM AEST
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Beauty is in the eye of the beholder,and before me I behold a beauty in you! Your sadness is short lived,as long as you hold within you hope. And I HOPE you have hope!!!
Hope will win!!!!!!
Angel always...godspeed...joni
p.s. excellently expressed words! |
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