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The Holes
Contributed by
Nsa
on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Looking down a neverending hole
Full of suspicion, misery, and hate
A rolling, churning hole
Full of souls weak enough to fail
Failing at life, love, and hope
Never to escape
Never to see the light of day
Forever falling, falling, falling
From now till eternity,
Falling and falling
Their screams can be heard
Pleading for help
Emanciated skeletons
Trapped in the hole
Until the end of forever
Gazing upward
Into a hole of light
Piercing the sky
Swirling with clouds
It floats lazily
In the middle of the sky
Invisible to the naked eye
It exists
Full of souls who succeeded
At love, hope, and life
Now full of purity
Wafting in the hole
Free to leave or enter
Laughing with joy
They can be heard
From the hole that is below
Well-fed and happy
Forever roaming around the world
Until the end of forever
Two holes collide,
One full of misery
The other full of happiness
Forever existing
Seen yet not seen,
They exist
And will exist
Until the end of forever
Copyright ©
Nsa
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2003-08-24 16:05:00]
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Re: The Holes
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by CrimsonTearz on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 09:54:15 PM AEST
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| good poem sarah.. now comment on mine! |
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Re: The Holes
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by Kalika on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 11:21:18 PM AEST
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it branched out beautifully, keep the great writes coming
Kali |
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